I wasn't good at English in high school.
Since then, I have an inferiority complex about English.
At age 37 I have suddenly restarted to study English by myself.
I don't know why. Maybe I want to overcome the complex.
Old age - superlatives,though - clouded my memory, and made me a slow learner.
(大げさな言い方ですが、年のせいで記憶力が落ち、物覚えが悪いです。)
But my English is progressing little by little.
ハイフンで、挿入する書き方をしてみましたが、これでいいのかなぁ。
今朝は5時半に起きました。爽やかな朝です。
【昨日の日記】
添削前:
I practice the belly dance, which comes from Arab countries, to keep in shape.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XOMtF6irGNg
This dance can train inner muscles, and you will get a good figure.
You can also enjoy dancing, and let off steam.
I recommend this dance to every woman.
To men, enjoy watching this fascinating dance!
添削後:
This dance can train inner muscles, and CAN GIVE YOU a good figure.
You can also enjoy THE DANCING FOR LETTING OUT STEAM.
To men, PLEASE enjoy watching this fascinating dance!
andの使い方、意外に難しい。
やっぱり、pleaseはつけないとダメよね^^;