Posting nr. 001: Writers’ Workshop Challengers’
January 2012 Assignment
Stage 3: Self-marking: 4/10: 6 mistakes out of 10 explanations.
To be learned:
1) Steven P. Job, the visionary co-founder of Apple who helped usher in the era of personal computers was all too young to die.
2) He created Macintosh personal computers and a string of out-of-the-box products.
3) He made Apple the world’s most valuable enterprise and was lauded as the best executive in the 21st century for his extraordinary talent.
4) His turbulent (or roller-coaster) life and charismatic presence often described as awesome never ceased to captivate the hearts of his many fans around the world.
5) Behind his brilliant success, however, he was battling a health problem.
6) He passed away as if he had been relieved to see the rollout of the new product.
7) Messages paying tribute and expressing gratitude to Jobs poured in on the Internet.
8) He had known several weeks before his death that his days were numbered.
9) Never will the heroic figure of Steve Jobs, clad in his signature xxx fade
from our hearts.
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Key words & Phrases to be Reviewed
Stage 1(to be challenged) 2(Applied) 3(Reflected)
Timeline To be solved What is redundant To be learned
10-Jun June(Crete)
12-Jun April(Marriage Activities) Jan(Steve Jobs)
12-Jul May(Lofoten Island) Feb(SMAP)
12-Aug Mar(Major Turning point)
